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Post by branden on Jul 19, 2007 20:07:38 GMT -5
8 bars.
no biting, you know it all.
Just for fun..Due tonight if poss?
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barbwire
emcee
when I forecast weather it's a wack mc rain delay
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Post by barbwire on Jul 19, 2007 20:25:16 GMT -5
il try
but if not def bt tamorow
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barbwire
emcee
when I forecast weather it's a wack mc rain delay
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Post by barbwire on Jul 19, 2007 21:00:25 GMT -5
u go first though
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Post by branden on Jul 19, 2007 22:06:28 GMT -5
umm ok...do what you need..ill post up in a few..
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Post by branden on Jul 19, 2007 22:51:43 GMT -5
There's no debate, that your the wackest lightweight/
Im not showing hate, but you can't handle whats on your plate/
You can't handle this abuse, im drinking my goose I don't want no truce/
Your young but that's no excuse, you still wouldn't be famous if your first name was bruce/
Right Lee? You can't Fight me, Tonight ain't ya night g/
It'll be alright ya see, because if your polite I might let you go free/
It's time to retire you got no desire it's ok if I inspire you Mr.Barbwire/
It's doesn't require much to beat you Im not even spitting fire/
I don't wanna leave you to shook your still a rook im not gonna throw a hook/
To be honest your lines would be better if you took them from a comic book/
Barb heres a fact, your lines don't have much of a impact/
Your a act, your seemed like your on crack, your skills lack/
You ain't big pun but you prob way a tun, your done/
I find this fun, go run, cause I just won/
You say 401 but your prob from seattle, your first to tattle/
So here's your rattle, next time make sure your ready for this battle/
His names wess lee.
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barbwire
emcee
when I forecast weather it's a wack mc rain delay
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Post by barbwire on Jul 20, 2007 10:18:31 GMT -5
jus like bruce lee bein the # 1 in karate
i weslee am the #1 emcee
i kno branden thinks hes stunnin but when he sees me he starts runnin
and wunderin how does his sick rhymes keep on comin and comin
this punk bitch think he can act big n rich
when really he's a snitch and being as good as me is his wish
I'm a ware you out like an over played song ,
then noone will wana lisin to ya not even ya own mom
man its like suburbs vs.'s the inner-city, theres gunna be 1 winner to be
so branded come see, if ya rhymes and amount to me
i so sick i'm bed ridden ,i'm lead spitting
u on the otha hand ya heads spinin, cuz ya kno ya to far behind to start winnin
i throw shit mainly slugs from a hot clip and please dont talk shit
cuz to much of that will make u get hit
man im repin the eastside 401
its like the east west battle and the east won!
ehh its not the best i havent done shit in a while lol ne way good luck branden
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barbwire
emcee
when I forecast weather it's a wack mc rain delay
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Post by barbwire on Jul 20, 2007 10:19:41 GMT -5
ohh and branden ur 3 bars short
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Post by branden on Jul 20, 2007 11:44:59 GMT -5
throw in those extra 3 for u vote up
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barbwire
emcee
when I forecast weather it's a wack mc rain delay
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Post by barbwire on Jul 20, 2007 11:55:47 GMT -5
yo nvm we both thought bars were diff things jus vote on the verses as is
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Post by Authentic on Jul 20, 2007 11:57:26 GMT -5
alright i can tell barb wasnt on top of his game. and Branden came wit mad wordplay and that Bruce line was a hard hit. some multies in there from barb tho. and barb i congradulate you, i think you're the first one to ever say somethin about someone's mom in a rap that wasnt horrible. that line was actually pretty good. but down to categories
punches - ehh. none really
nameplay - Branden (that bruce line)
multies: Barbwire (you guys gotta step that up tho Barb only had like 1)
flow: both of you had stretched lines throughout the whole verse so. none
wordplay: Branden. easily
knockout: both were kinda weak but Branden had that category.
final vote - Branden
1-0
uppinnnn
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Post by maximum on Jul 21, 2007 0:56:54 GMT -5
punches - branden
nameplay - branden
multies: branden
flow: barbwire
wordplay:branden
knockout:branden
Final Vote: Branden
Good work branden keep it up
Barbwire, better luck next time
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Post by branden on Jul 25, 2007 22:20:14 GMT -5
votes
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Post by pappawalsh17 on Jul 26, 2007 1:44:10 GMT -5
branden kicked barbwires ass
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Post by pappawalsh17 on Jul 26, 2007 1:46:26 GMT -5
brandens got more flow to his shit and it all comes together to make more sense than barbwires freestyle
i aint dissin' barbwire but brandens deff got him beat
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Post by Devious D. on Jul 26, 2007 23:56:33 GMT -5
wow...
this isnt even funny lol, you guys are horrible...I know you arent really rappers, you guys are just playing around..But damn, learn to write some shit.
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